Drum jam - iros definetly better quality then a lot of drum
I thought I'd leave a review since you asked for someone to critique it and no one has yet. I'm definetly far from an expert at recording techniques but I met as well leave my knowledge, just incase if you don't already.
clarity wise, it sounded pretty slick, I've heard a lot worse recordings regarding drums. needless to say, its more feasible and less expensive to record eletric instruments, and even solo acoustic instruments are vocals. for drums, you may have to buy multiple mics, and position them correctly to get the sound you want, and to make you sure you get all the drum pieces in the mix. even in some cases you have to get special walls to dampen the sound or eliminate vibrations to make your drumset sound more authentic. anyway, it doesnt sound to bad here. if you want to go for a more bassier sound, record lower towards the bass, and if you want a more trebly sound, record higher up. what my friend personally does is record one piece of his equipment at a time, like he'll record his snare first, bass, hi-hats, and so forth. I'm not exactly sure how it works or how he does it. there also is a program on the web that sharpens up your drums sounds-cant remember what its called but I believe I have the exectutable somewhere on my computer. I'm sure google would give you some good results as well.
one thing you could do is a put a light compressor on the track, or atleast on the snare, it causes some minimal clipping. the EQ levels could be brought up a little bit too. or maybe its just the drumset, in this case. the bass drum could have been bassier, the snare sounded a little to tinny, which can be fixed by tightening the actual snare and maybe raising the mids in the equalization a bit. nothing too drastic needs to be done tho, it might just be the drumsets fault for being too cheap. also, varied reverb levels could also add a little more interesting tone.
now on to the actual composition of this clip. since there is no guitars, bass, synths, vocals, or other instruments going along with the drums, the drum solo is generally boring, and needs more variety. it also gets a bit sloppy and off time at certain parts, especially when you kinda construct a beat with the kick and snare. you're snare rolls seem kinda sloppy to me as well. I see you added some nice rolls on the hi hats. in the first bit, you could have added a bit more intensity to the hi hats, like ascending hi hat riffs where you slowly open up the pedal. if you have a double bass kick, you could have incorporated some sixteen note fills and such. also, I don't see any toms in the track, that would have definetly added more spice. I do like the alternating ride/crash and hi-hats tho near the middle part of the track. around 1:30-to 1:35 was the best part in my opinion. I also like the bass work you do near the later half of the track. the track did not have a very good ending IMO, it kinda seemed halfed ass and anticlamatic..try building up the end your to your songs with a nice tom riff, or use open hi hats and crash cymbals to make the piece more exciting. now I know this is a shitload of stuff, so dont worry about all this right now...no biggie man, you'll definetly improve in the future. its ust something for you to look off of.
again, the drum solo wouldnt be to blase if you had some people to jam with.
you have some drum talent man, but keep working on your skills an rudiments and practice with a metronome. good luck in the future and keep drumming, the world needs more drummers :P also dont worry about the 6, I 5 everyone since you'll get 0 bombed anyway.