did you do this for the lulz?
this is pretty damn catchy....could be used in a cheesy flash or game. what would be funny as hell prank would be as while some of your friends are having sex and listing to romantic music, place this one minute into the song lol.
It's more of a tribute to the stupid lofi music in old games
that prank sounds fun, I'll should do that sometime
kinda sounds like something in FF8
nice romantic sound you going on here, i would love to hear the full version. cant grade this one too fairly because it ends abruptly(and its just a sample). if you werent on planning on this already, just add some reverb to the keys to make it sound more realistic, and vary up the pace a little more. when the track gets off the ground, add some more hi-hat hits, a better EQed bass kick and a snare or clap. just some suggestions :P good luck!
First off, so sorry for the late late late late response...my hard drive FRIED...ugh so this song needs to be began ALL over again, terrible huh? im even having trouble getting FL studio back, (dealing with demo of 7 right now, liked 5 producer edition better :(...) anyway thanks for the review, and sorry again
not too shabby coming off a writers block...
a bit awkard, a tad slow...
some freakish melodies in here....sounds like robots getting eletrocuted in a green pond. the track gets interesting after the panned arpsynths come in to play. nice chirpy synths in here. the melody around 1:50ish is nice, and the themes used int he first track flows well to finish the rest of the song. there was no huge climax in here, but not too bad.
i dont like the drums, its a decent beat, but you need more realistic electronic samples, or EQ them a bit better. to variate your track a bit more you could some FX on the lead synth that echoes, like some reverb or a chorus effect every now and then. also, to fill the void that there is in the track, there needs more bass...that synth in ever bar, that sounds kinda brassyish, could be transcribed an octave or two and used a bassline, it will create more warmth. keep experimenting with music.
and good luck with your writers block...what i like do when I have these type of problems is listen to different styles of music, or learn/analyze other musicians work for inspiration.
First off, thanks for the review, and yeah the drums i also think could've been better, bass...thats what i was forgetting...but i have a few projects that haven't been worked on in ages, so im gonna get to those first, then i might end up remixing this song
Ambient DnB? I like it
good job on this one man. phased pads makes for a nice intro, some cool FX on the synth once the bass comes in. the intro builds up at an appropriate speed and flows together very well throughout. so good job until 1:50, nice atmospheric relaxed sounding clips.
no real criticism here on this track-maybe you could have changed the drums on the second part of the track, add some more power to the bassline. by changing the drums you could have made them more realistic, added some reverb and get a more punchy sound...but I like what you got going on here. a louder lead synth would sound pretty swell in here too.
Good stuff!
i'd completely agree with u on that one but i can do much with it coz im using garage band: a really basic package thats part of i life for a mac n e way ty for the pointers
weird atmospheric feel....
this was a prertty different track, some unique ethnic sounds, but you need to work on gelling everything together.
the guitarish synth has an interesting melody, and the ethnic percussion is pretty sweet. keep the percussion going throughout man, perhaps add a different, slow beat to keep up with the track...the lead synth and piano are nice too, but in some sections of song the flow kinda sounds a bit jumbled....
some flaws in here that can be fixed, but a nice track man.
thank you...i was thinking of a remix....?
nice sound....
this is probably my favorite song in FFX2....but it sounds like you just imported the midi directly into FL studio(correct me if i'm wrong) and ran the piano parts threw the harpo sytrus preset :/
still it has really cool melodies and a beautiful sound, just work more on making your track more original, like mix the rhythms, add some percussion and add your own flavor to make it a more personal remix.
Nah I didnt input the midi. I actually figured it out all by ear and made the tune with the Styrus Piano
Sweetness man.
love the synths in the intro...too bad it was only 10 seconds tho, with cool sounds like that you should have made it longer :)
interesting trance groove, love the higher end percussion...around 1:00 that fast arpsynth is sweet! it really adds some originality and diversity to your piece...the ambient section around 1:30 is nice and atmospheric.
overall, slick track you got going here...some sections of the song and the nice arpsynth add some depth to your track, otherwise tho, the verse sections could use some more originality to retain some interest...still catchy riffs, but I would try to spice up the rhythms next time around....if you like :)
Hey, thanks! I discovered that I need to write more ambience. =P
hey thanks for the gift
this is a groovy audio clip right here. love the keys and the saws smoothing its way into the track, and how they swirl throughout my speakers...sweet phase/flange effect going here. some real nice melodies too. I love the acidy sequenced thats around 1;20...sounds real professional, and I love the reverb pads that you keep with it.
the ending to this track is perfect, some real nice drum sounds going around around 3:00, and pretty sweet gloomy piano melody.
the productionn and sound is pretty much perfect, great selection of synths, pads, and FX. i just think you could transition your melodies a bit better. the third phase around 1:15, it sounded like you were stopping the track and entering into a new song, so I guess there could be some smoother progression in here. and at 2:37, sounds like you could have used another chord before this one, or we using a key change? but it kinda sounds cool!
great dance/techno track! I like it :)
Yup!
Im planning to make the song more versatile in keys\notes meaning.
Thanks for de suport and the great commenting! xD
Really helpful!
If I do the extended version I will let you know as soon as I have it =3
Epic Win.
damn this one damn badass metal song! it sounds like some holy type of battle is going on, you've got some real killer metal riffs in here. it really has everything I like in a song. some nice lead riffs, fast heavy metal rhythms, badass drums(love the cymbal work!), which flow perfectly with the song....I also love where you include the short quiet bits in here, the first one around 2:00, and the one around 2:30 with the crying lady is a pretty sweet instrumental, love the harps and keys, some really saddening melodies. then you open it back with a lovely riff, and those organ pads are just truly amazing. great for a long battle scene....man, again love those pads, thats what makes metal tracks like this so diverse and a pleasure to listen to. i love the choirs around 6:20ish, and you go right back into metal madness. well, i dont wanna drag on repeating myself any longer, but let me just say, great ending, and i dont know if you intended to do this, but it ties along right with the intro and the lady crying right along 2:30....the beast is scaring the citizens of the town in the intro, one of the children gets killed during 2:30, and in the end the beast wins?
great quality production here. i think the harp and lead guitar could be a bit louder too. I would also love to see a guitar solo bit somewhere in here, that would have been nice.
but man once again, amazing track, you've got some great technical skill and talent composing. i will defintely favorite this because i'll listen to it again.
You just leveled up my happiness. Thanks! ;D
Crazy bro
This sounds like a circus is getting sucked into a black hole.....lots of weird bits in here, but its a different type of nice, great levels of intensity throughout the track.
the intro didnt really draw my attention, and there was some clipping on my speakers, try putting down a light compressor of sorts, and during certain parts of the song the hi-hats got too trebly :S
but really interesting approach here, lots of randomness, but it connects well, you've got some crazy ass riffs in here. nice chromatic percussion and hyper drum beats. nice synths, the one in the middle of the song struck me by surprise and its hella stick, its intensifying. near the end there is so more clipping too.
but more sick licks in here, just optimize some volume levels and you'll have a perfect track! stick to making DnB too :D
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