Sick!
decent intro, but it was kinda slow and overly long IMO. the first 17 seconds werent particularly interesting. You've got a nice melody to work with, but since its solo you should probably intergrate a more developed rhythm. once the toms com in real nice...good job of keeping it unpredictable, I really wasnt expecting that majestic major chord coming in, sounds really good. I would have made a little hook with the guitar and then brought in the main sequence right theyre....Now the spooky melody sounding melody that comes in around 1:45 came in to unexpected, like they're an accompaniment for a section that already happened. So I believe there should be a better transition right there.
Guitars sound really great! Very good job with the mixing, you've got a nice distorted tone, and the choirs dont sound so cheap in combination. Maybe try panning your cymbals to the left or right a little bit more for a more stereo mix. Thats a really kickass heavy riff around 3:15, and I love the blast beats. double bass drums are hella awesome. and I love the tranisitioning back into the original theme, and I love how you mimicked the main choir melodies with another vocal range. No guitar solo? :(
so a real sweet track you got here, I just thought the intro was too long. oh and check your inbox :P