Amazing
Those are beautiful, authentic sounding keys used in here. Great mastering job regarding the piano. Melodies and the rhythm fit the theme and lyrics perfectly. I love the breaks at the end of the main piano riffs(like 1:54-1:56) which is great branch into the chrous of the song. Good job on the drums as well, and I'm loving the moody chord progression.
The guitar solo in the end is also killer, love the distorted tone in here, it suchs a great sound...lots of emotion and nicely phrased. it's also starts off nice and slow, and has a clean leggato riff once it advances, and finishes off with the simpler high note melody perfect for concluding up a song. The bass seems like it could raised be a level to make a more fuller sound...
As for the vocals, they were sang quite well and constructed nicely with the flow of the keys in the song. but I just wasn't digging the overall style and lyrics-it just sounded a little bit unoriginal and a "LOL mainstream" love song to me, like something that could be on American Idol(but that could definetly be considered a compliment). BTW, i think some black gospel women would be perfect here for backing vocals! :D
Another criticism could be the entire structuring of the song. The song was already five minutes, but it seemed mostly like a dragged out intro-it wasnt really proportionate with the rest of the track. the first chorus was only 15-20 seconds long, i dont want to limit creativity, but IMO it would have been nicer if the "meat" of the song had more to it.
Overall, excellent portrayal of talent here. Beautiful work..